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This crazy dance,
on this thin ice floor,
this two steps forward, one step back,
and this mangle of mixed signals
this is frustration
make up your mind
a simple yes or no
but you
you must be handled with care
i cant push
because youll pull back
and i cant pull you close
becasue youll push me away
yet still you beckon me,
staying just out of reach
this frustration
this torture
when all i want to do
is show you how it could be
how it coudl be if you just give in to me
let the fire burn
let it consume us both
adn let me show what passion really
but yet i am left wiht this
this frustration
this curse
why do you play with me so?
why do you leave me
with my body burnign, begging pleading,
to have so much more?
i need i crave, im desolate
save em from this frustration
take me of let me go
i cant handle this frustration
:iconsekmet667:
hmmmmm....discribes frustration...amazign that..it fits with the title
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:iconstrawberrysundae:
wow that's really good...also really creative
i think you should enter this one into your contest! :)
oh yeah...one of my favs... :)
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:iconsekmet667:
~sekmet667 Feb 26, 2005   Writer
thank you! adn thnks for the suggestion...hmm ihtnk i will enter this one...and thankx for the fave
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*TehBeardedOne Feb 26, 2005  Hobbyist Digital Artist
again ur work is powerful, potent, and relatable, (i think that's a word lol) great work as always
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~sekmet667 Feb 26, 2005   Writer
thnak you very muhc
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:icontehbeardedone:
*TehBeardedOne Feb 27, 2005  Hobbyist Digital Artist
no problem
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