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I dance in the rain,
Letting it soak my clothes through
And I look to the sky and shout,
A prayer that this rain reaches you

We’re under the same sky,
We both see the same moon
But we’re so far apart and I just want to be with you
So hear my whispered wishes and hold your breath
Because I’m sending this message of love to you

I listen to the wind sing,
It’s voice humming through the trees
And I start to sign along
A song that the wind might carry to you

We’re under the same sky,
We both shine under the same sun,
But we’re so far apart and I just want to be with you.
So here’s my whispered wishes meant for your ears alone,
Promises of eternal love I’m sending to you

I cry unto the violent storm,
I scream unto the endless nights,
And I wish upon that same bright star,
I’ll do anything to let you know I love you

We’re under the same sky,
We both know the same night
But we’re so far apart and I just want to be with you
So go dance in the rain and listen to the wind
You will hear me singing my song of love for you

So next time you feel the rain on your face,
Or the sun on your skin,
Next time the wind moves over your skin,
Just remember that it’s a message of love from me.

We’re so far apart and I just want to be with you,
So listen for my whispered dreams and know
That these are my messages of love for you
:iconsekmet667:
uh yeha this i kinda mushy. i thoguht i was kind of prety. i got the idea whiel workign on my comp desktop. ive eben cleeanin it up ad everythign...its kinda a tribute to the people were in love wht but cant be close to becaus thye liv to far away, are doin service ro somtin of that nature, so eha hop eoyu enjoy it and go danc ein the rain
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:iconchanli:
Oh.. wonderful text... I really like it...

I´ve got a little bit sad by reading it ^^'' ... yeah - the ones you love are sometimes really far away..

by the way... the poem is written nearly like a songtext... would be nice to hear it sing by someone ^__~
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:iconsekmet667:
~sekmet667 Jan 17, 2008   Writer
Thank you, it's nice to know that my work can make people feel, that makes me feel so glad to know that.
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:iconevenstephen:
~evenstephen Feb 2, 2005  Student General Artist
Interesting... its funny, it reminds me of a poem i once did called 'under the same stars'... check it out if you want.

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your poem was along the same sort of theme... good work on this one tho :)
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:iconsekmet667:
~sekmet667 Feb 2, 2005   Writer
thank you very much, and yes ill tkae a look at your poem
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:iconevenstephen:
~evenstephen Feb 2, 2005  Student General Artist
thanks mate :D, i appreciate it :D, your poem was good btw :) (not sure if i said that...)
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:iconsekmet667:
~sekmet667 Feb 2, 2005   Writer
hehe, you said so, i aprciate the compliment all the same, how did you find this particular poem though? i mean, its no one of my latests nor put on many peopels favorites...so how?
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~evenstephen Feb 2, 2005  Student General Artist
its called 'random deviation'... i was browsing random deviations and i came across that poem... it stuck out coz i had written a similar poem... so... yeah... that is pretty much it
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:iconsekmet667:
~sekmet667 Feb 2, 2005   Writer
ahhhhh, now i see. i don't have much time for random browsing. well at least i won't till i finish up finals
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~evenstephen Feb 2, 2005  Student General Artist
well also a fast connection helps :P... lol...
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~sekmet667 Feb 2, 2005   Writer
*blinks* dsl isnt fast?
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