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The beating of your heart
and the whispers of your breath
hold me in suspension

in your arms im safe
from all the turmoil out there
i have a place to rest

the taste of your kiss
and the flavor of your skin
seduce me as no other can

in your arms im free
from all the inhibitions
i have no more rules

the way you caress my skin
and touch me just like that
brings to my knees

in your arms i am captive
a slave to your hands
always begging for more
:iconsekmet667:
uh.......i dunno what to say, i guess this genre is a bit new to me, so bear wif it okies?
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:iconfushicho:
if that's your first time it's good, goddess. even if it wasn't, it's still good. :3
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~sekmet667 May 25, 2005   Writer
thankies
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:iconstrawberrysundae:
i think it's really good. its def a different style of writing for you but it's really good nonetheless
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:iconsekmet667:
~sekmet667 May 24, 2005   Writer
thank you very much, i was a but nervous abot writting in a dif style, i dotn like goign out of my pattern
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*TehBeardedOne May 24, 2005  Hobbyist Digital Artist
well considerin u haven't done much like this before, i reckon uve done a good job, and even if u had done stuff like this b4, it wud still b a good job =-)
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~sekmet667 May 24, 2005   Writer
thankies
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:icontehbeardedone:
*TehBeardedOne May 25, 2005  Hobbyist Digital Artist
no worries
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:iconxbleedxeternalx:
I knwo its probably meant to be describing a love for a person, this really reminded me of the book 1984. I could just see something like this being said about the party by a recently re-educated member.
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~sekmet667 May 24, 2005   Writer
*blinks* should i say thank you? *is confused*
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:iconxbleedxeternalx:
Lol, sorry, I thought it was good. Guess I should have made that point :P
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